IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks clear examples. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary and ideas need further development and precision.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 42 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 22 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Stricter environmental laws are essential for sustainable development, though they may negatively impact industries and economic growth.
Do you agree or disagree that governments should implement stricter environmental laws despite potential negative impacts on the economy?
#Environment
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:232
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
nature
. That's
why, in my opinion, the idea of implementing
stricter environmental laws
can be crutial
in establishing sustainable development for the nature
, even though there is a possibility of affecting economy
negatively.That's
true that, with influence of law
that protects environment of being furtherly
damaged, a lot of businesses and factories will lose their productivity as the possivle
usable sources
will be greatly decreased. It will be resulted
in dropping
in economy
and infuence
of country on global
market. However, if a draining of naturale
sources
doesn't
stop soom
enough, in few years the negative impact of such careless actions will be visible for the entire world. So, no matter
what happens, sooner or later
economy
of many countries will be influenced either by stricter environmental laws
or people's greediness. That's
why
instead of damaging the planet
the better-case scenario is to implement
variety
of rules for its protection.In
counclusion
, I think that
no matter
what the
economy
will be greatly
imacted
in any case but, in order to prevent draining of natural
sources
,
it's
much better for the governments to
implement
laws
that could possibly protect the
nature
and reduce industries' effect on the
nature
as soon as possible.