IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth in argumentation and examples. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Global interaction often leads to cultural exchange, which can result in both enrichment and dilution of individual cultures.
Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of cultural exchange outweigh the risks of losing cultural uniqueness?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:243
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
people
in all around the world have more
and more
interaction
with each other
through the internet and talk about their culture
. Some people
says
the good side of cross-cultural
interaction
brings to us can surpass the risks of losing cultural
uniqueness. There are points for and against this statement, but overall
I agree with this idea.First of all,
cultural
sharing will help people
to gain more
knowledge about the other
culture
around the world. That action easily supports people
to learn many new things that they have never known before while chatting with someone through a website. For example, a European can get some information about the African when talking to some Africans through social media.Another point is that global
interaction
can help their country
grow better. If you chat with your international friends about your nation's culture
, your friends might get interest and spread it out to their relatives and
maybe they will come to your country
to visit. For instance, a number of visitors from other
countries
came to Thailand because several foreigners told them about the nice things of Thailand on the online network.In conclusion, I acquiesce in the view which the advantages of intercultural
interaction
exceed the dangers of losing our unique culture
. I think if we can continue this, in the future, we will have no more
discrimination and people
will become more friendly and have different thought about other
countries
.