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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in idea development and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the overall quality of the essay.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 41 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 17 | |
| Lexical resource | 16 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Promoting cycling and walking as complements to public transport can enhance public health and reduce urban congestion. However, it requires infrastructure investment and may not be feasible everywhere.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of promoting cycling and walking alongside public transport.
#Public Transport
#Advantage / Disadvantage
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Thesis Statement
people
are more concern about the growing traffic on the road. The only way to reduce the number of vechile
is to promote the use of cycle
, public vechile
or by walking
to the destination. Ofcourse
, these three have positive impact but
it comes along with some negative impact as well.Talking about the advantages first, when a person
use
his physical
strenght
to move from one place to
another
such as
walking
and
cycling
it will improve their health condition, as he will have movement in his
body
which is important to fight with many diseases.
An individual can live long
and healthy life through it.Using
the public transport as a mean of transportation will reduce the number of cars and bikes on the road. When many people
use
a shared vechile
as a
acessibility
there
will be low traffic. It is more useful for the urban areas as the population in those places are really high.Following the
advantages
they also have disadvantages along with it. Going to various places by walking
and cycling will be very difficult for the elder people
because of their strenght
. Old people
neither can really walk
too far nor they can use
the bicycle properly
and also travelling in buses with number of people
is quite harsh for them.Implication of big
vechile
that can accomodate
many people
at a single time needs proper funding
which is challenging for the economically backward nations. Government investment for the transportation is not only sufficient as they have to build the roads to run those vechile
properly. All of these expenses cannot be done by financially
struggling country.In conclusion,implication of
walking
, cycling and use of public transport for movement can be boon for the society but
it can be curse
for some people
and nations .