IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 7
IELTS Essay Sample Band 7
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The essay effectively addresses the question, providing clear arguments and examples. However, minor grammatical errors and occasional awkward phrasing slightly detract from its overall quality.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Online education offers unprecedented flexibility in terms of time and place of study, contrasting with the structured discipline of traditional classroom settings.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that the flexibility offered by online education is more beneficial than the structured discipline of traditional classrooms?
#Online Education
#Agree / Disagree
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Nowadays,
more
and more
individuals are choosing to study
virtually. Studying
online often offers
the flexibility on where one can study
, compared to the old way of studying
which typically required one to attend a physical school to be able to learn. This essay agrees that, studying
online offers
more
advantages than attending a physical school.Firstly, online
learning
offers
flexibility and convenience, as students
avoid travel, which allows them to be able to complete other tasks in their day. For instance, it offers
a working proffessional
the opportunity to study
from the comfort of their home in the evening after a hard day's work, instead of travelling to a school. This way of learning
also allows for lectures to be recorded, allowing the student
to watch them at a time that is convenient for them. Additionally, there are online platforms created where students
can interact together as well as with the teaching staff.Furthermore, it is more economical to
study
online as there are no travel costs incured
by the students
or the lecturers. For this and many other reasons, this way of learning
is becoming more attractive, due to the rising cost of living, and frequently increasing fuel prices. It is also beneficial for students
as they have the opportunity spend
their money on other education related costs, such as books.In conclusion, virtual
learning
offers
more
advantages than having to attend campus to study
as it is cheaper and more flexible.