IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6
IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
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The essay addresses the question well and provides a clear opinion, but it contains several grammatical errors and lacks some coherence. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 52 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 30 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:337
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
Nowadays, many
people
argue that
it's
complicated for anyone to familiarize with a
country
's
culture
unless they speak
it's
native
language
.I
completely
agree with this
point of view
as a
country
's
language
is the main way of communication with
it's
own
people
as well as socializing and having
friends
Both will be
analyzed
below.
First and foremost,learning a
country
's
language
breaks the barrier between anyone and the citizens of a
country
as you have the ability to communicate and express your thoughts thoroughly.The perfect example is when you communicate with natives of the
country
you can clearly understand this
country
's
culture
from
people
's thoughts and traditions.
Despite the fact that
many think that
it's
not recommended to communicate with
people
with different
cultures
.
It's
neverthless
true that experiencing new traditions and
cultures
improve
your mental health and
doesnt
make you a judgemental character.
Secondly,
it's
most obvious that
knowing
a
country
's
language
helps you
in
socializing and making
friends
which is the most important benefit of speaking the
language
as one of the popular problems that face expats is isolation and not being able to have
friends
.Mostly the reason behind this is not speaking the
language
of the
country
as most of the
people
wouldnt
accept to talk in a
language
different from their own.Although many would argue
that
it's
not a main reason for not socializing.It is
therfore
, proved that making
friends
and familiarizing with a new
culture
is totally harder when you have the
lannguage
barrier.As such,
it's
clear that
knowing
the
language
of a
country
is crucial in deciding
wheather
or not you will be able to adapt.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that without
knowing
a
country
's
language
it's
nearly impossible to get to
know
their
culture
aswell
.I think in the
forseeable
future, more and more
people
will start learning the
country
's
language
before they land
into
it.