IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6

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The essay addresses the challenges faced by single parents but lacks depth in discussing support systems. Grammar and vocabulary are generally adequate, though there are some awkward constructions and limited lexical variety. Coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and a clearer structure.

Overall score	6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	6.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	6.0

Writing Task

#Family

#Problem / Solution

Single parenting can be particularly challenging due to the dual responsibilities of caregiving and providing financially.

What are the main challenges faced by single parents, and what support systems can be established to assist them?

Submitted Answer

Words244|Paragraphs2

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Thesis Statement

Nowadays, couples experience challenges in maintaining commitment to hold a relationship and when this happens, those who have

children

already will face dilemmas such as who will be the one to

take

care of their

child

children

. The one who decided to

take

care of the

child

will always find balancing quality

time

and providing for the

child

difficult to manage. It

takes

for that

parent

to have outstanding management skills to be fully present with the

child

The main challenges would be: first, the

single

parent

should be, if not always, should be often present for the

child

physically and emotionally to

give

support. Second, maintaining order in the household, that includes managing the house to maintain order and cleanliness and providing groceries. Third, having

time

for one's self aside from spending

time

with their

children

. It is usually the most challenging for some because this is when the

single

parent

will experience stress and longing for those

times

when he or she still

get

to have

time

to pamper his or herself. Lastly, finding people that can be trusted to

take

their place in being present for the

children

, whether at home or at school. Usually,

single

parents

rely on the help of the

children

's grandparents, uncles or aunties. Most of the

time

, it is usually the grandparents who are trusted to make up for the responsibilities that

single

parents

can not

provide while they are busy with work.

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Total Errors	20
Grammatical range and accuracy	2
Lexical resource	9
Coherence & cohesion	4
Task response	5