IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

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The essay addresses the task but lacks clear structure and coherence, with frequent grammatical errors affecting readability. Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety, and the essay could benefit from more developed ideas and examples.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	4.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Technology

#Advantage / Disadvantage

A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives.

Do you agree that living in the computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.

Submitted Answer

Words225|Paragraphs4

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Thesis Statement

Now a days with the advance of the

technology

we could improve actions that in the past will cost a lot of time to do or finish.

With a

computer

we can send a message

instanly

to another person that have another

computer

, but in the past if we want to send a message to someone we had to wait one o three days at least for the other person could

recieve

the message, also with the online payments, now we can do it faster and secure with some applications that the banks implements for the people

that

have a bank account,

futheremore

with a

computer

and internet you have a chance to have a job and work in your home, and with a

computer

you can search

everething

you want

in the internet

With a

computer

in our houses we could

lost

our time using the

computer

and become addictive to it, also if we

don't

seat in

a correct positions

in a long time we can hurt our back or neck,

furtheremore

with the

computer

age increasing we are losing cognitive skills and that could affect our health.

After all expose I think that the

computer

and technology have improved the way we communicate, work and perform daily tasks, making everything faster and more

effeicient

, also the human control all the

techonology

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Total Errors	31
Grammatical range and accuracy	7
Lexical resource	13
Coherence & cohesion	6
Task response	5