IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 45 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 14 | |
| Lexical resource | 22 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Deforestation contributes significantly to climate change by reducing the number of trees that can absorb CO2.
Explain how deforestation contributes to climate change and propose solutions to curb deforestation.
#Climate Change
#Problem / Solution
Submitted Answer
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Words:199
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
extream
popluation
leds
to deforestation which cause
significant damage in
the enviornment
. This affect
both weather and habitat of the earth.I believe there are three major issues and alos
some practical steps we can take to eliminate this
,Perhap the largest
probem
is the issue of population,Which creating
need of
housing and industries. People are trying to make houses and this creating
deforestation and climate change. for
example
excessive housing needs may leads
to chances to high construction works. This will reduce the trees and producing large amout
of cO2 in the atmosphere. Another major concerns
linked with this is industrialization. most
of the industries ommiting
CO2.LAck
of trees to convert CO2 to Oxygen would create
massive impact in
humans
mental health and psysical
health as well.Turning
in
to possible solutions,The biggest step would be creating
awareness amoung
people about the negative concequences
associated with this trend. Goverment
can also regulate this issue by law. Media nad
schools can also piut
efforts to educate students regarding the importance of trees and climate balancing.To sum up , The key problems of deforestation can be
adressed
through awareness creation, legislatin
and better practices.