IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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04 Apr 25, 20:57
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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in exploring the issues and solutions, with limited examples and analysis. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity, and the essay lacks a clear thesis statement and logical flow.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors27
Grammatical range and accuracy9
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion8
Task response5

Writing Task

#Government Spending
#Problem / Solution
The educational sector in many regions suffers from lack of sufficient government funding, impacting the quality of education provided.
Examine the issues resulting from insufficient government spending on education and suggest ways to increase funding in this sector.

Submitted Answer

Words205|Paragraphs4
English:US English
Global Issues:
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Missing Linking Devices
Thesis Statement
Many sources show that many
regions
suffer from
lack
of sufficient government funding in the educational sector, impacting the quality of education provided.
Paragraph 2 Issues:
Missing Linking Devices
Education is a fundamental pillar of social development, fostering, economic growth, social progress and
indivual
empowerment.
Paragraph 3 Issues:
Missing Linking Devices
A research made by
an
university in Toronto shows that the poorest
region
in the world is located in the south of America, One of the most visible effects of low government funding in this place is the deteriorating
infraestructure
.
To solve this problem, this research
suggest
solutions in short and long terms.
As an example of a solution in a short term is to ask for help to ONG's such as UNICEF, with fast courses with teachers abroad,of bakery, receptionists, call center,
etc
, courses that will help people to work and save money to study whatever they want abroad, satisfy their
necesities
and increase with this way funding in this sector.
In
the other hand, a
long term
solution could be to make a loan to hire trained staff abroad who will teach and capacitate teachers of the
region
, and the rest of the money could be
use
to repair the inadequate infrastructure around the
region
, and prepare the classrooms with new technology.

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