IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in some areas. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, and there are several errors that affect readability and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 30 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
#Family
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
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Words:286
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
Many
people believe that life
in out of city
is more suitable
whereas some of them think it it
better for children
to grow up in an urban area
. In this essay, i
'am
going to write about both pros and cons of both places.Talking about urban
areas
, the children
have many
options and facilities to explore, play and study in different sector as well. Availability of excellent roads and vehicles, which make easy to go to school on time. Diversity of visit places can be seen in the town, where the children
can go and experience so many
things
such as KTM FUN PARK, they can enjoy there by playing swings, small electronic car and other
things. Different types of courses and subjects can be helpful to them to choose in which they are interested.On the
other
hand, so many
negative activities are being done in the city
while the countryside's daughters and sons have no ideas. They are living in a small area
with simple
life
and
they don't
even know so many
things. The children
in the city
, play or involved in mobile games most
of their daily life
. But, in the rural areas
, they spend their time with family and friends by helping each other
and doing physical activities together. People trust that the children
in the city
are affected by whatever other
person do
they follow that. If someone is having something bad to thier
health but the children
want to copy it.In conclusion, the
life
in the city
can be more flexible and lots of availability of opportunities with some negative impacts too. However, the life
in the coutryside
is more better
with limited facilities.