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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6

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10 Apr 25, 00:08
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The essay presents a relevant argument but lacks clarity in its thesis statement and logical flow. Improved coherence and more varied vocabulary would enhance the overall quality.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors19
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource8
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response5

Writing Task

#Family
#Agree / Disagree
Traditional roles within families have evolved significantly over the past few decades due to various social and economic changes.
Do you agree or disagree that traditional roles within the family are no longer relevant in today's society?

Submitted Answer

Words153|Paragraphs1
English:UK English
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
Judging the
relevance
of traditional
gender
roles
in society would require, first, a clear definition of "
relevance
". Prior to the feminist movement, one can assume that
gender
roles
were "relevant" as a social construct, an unwelcome
impositon
on women, and
in many cases
, men.
Gender
roles
, since, have been protested and resisted, decreasing in "
relevance
" more, and more throughout the decades following
sufferage
. Present-day society is reverting to
gender
roles
but as a need and out of necessity. This is evident, with the rise in costs of living, in the circulation of such terms as "Trad wife" - referring to traditional wives- and the romanticization of Traditonal
gender
roles
.
Therefore, it can be argued that
gender
roles
are as relevant as they were pre
sufferage
, it is just the circumstances surrounding their
relevance
that have shifted from an unjustifiable and, in most cases, inconvenient system, to one which is needed to survive again.

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