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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay presents a clear opinion but lacks coherence and cohesion, with ideas not fully developed or logically organized. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and formality, which should be improved for a higher band score.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 50 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 31 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Climate Change
#Agree / Disagree
While some argue that more resources should be devoted to adaptation strategies to deal with the effects of climate change, others believe that mitigation efforts to prevent further climate change must be prioritized.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that adaptation strategies should be prioritized over mitigation strategies?
Submitted Answer
Words333|Paragraphs4
English:
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
It is the opinion of some that more resources should be directed towards reducing the
impacts
of
climate
change
while others are of the opinion that it is better to
focuse
all effort to the
measures
that will
prevent
adverse
changes
in
climate
condition.
In my opinon
, i
strongly believe that focusing all strategies to
preventing
the occurance
of this adverse condition should be the priority .To begin, It is obvious that
impact
of the changes
in the climate
conditon
is affecting human in almost aspect of life. This ranges from the agricultural sector where crops production has adversely been affected,
even though
alot
of funds have been directed to this sector for purchase of
fertilzers
of different brands and introduction of different improved species of crop all to
mitagate
the consequences resulting from poor crop yield and by extension hunger associated with food shortage, Occean surge
ia
another area where palliative
measures
have been put in place to mitigate the
impact
of
climate
change
.
Even though
alot
has been done in this regard with billion of naira spent to
salvege
the aquatic environment and its valuable resources , this has obviously yielded
apprciable
result and such
measure
should be commended .
On the other hand, effort to
prevent
or mitagate
activities resulting in adverse changes
in clamatic
conditon
will produce more lasting effect. In reality, most of these measures
are less expensive as they are largely attitudinal changes
and behavioural modifications. Some of the well contributing factors to
climate
change
like use of
fosil
fuel, deforestation,
occean
reclamation to measure just a
few
can be
prevented
by
regualtion
including
pushment
and reward system on one hand , introduction of
alternative
to
fosil
fuel could be another
measure
.
putting
these preventing
measures
together will help give a lasting solution to menance
of climate
change
.In conclusion,
even though
spending money to mitigate the impact
of climate
cahange
will give immediate relief, i
strongly believe that prevent
the occurance
of climate
change
should be the main focus