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The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. The ideas are relevant but need better development and organization, and the vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 41 | |
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| Lexical resource | 25 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Public health campaigns are essential tools for promoting healthful behaviors and awareness about diseases, but they can sometimes lead to misinformation or fear.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of public health campaigns?
#Health
#Advantage / Disadvantage
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Thesis Statement
campaings
are performing a major role in ongoing health services for decades to improve public health and educting
on preventing diseases, also these programs
can miscommiunicate
the information which can lead to unnecessary fear. Health is one of the most important factors in human life. That can be mentale
or physicale
health. Due to
busy lifestyles, people have adopted to an unhealthy practices
. Specially, with the technologicale
improvements, individuals food patterns, medications and work patterns has been changed.Nowadays,
due to
unhealthy beahaviors
and technologicale
advancement, lot of
diseases , viruses are roming
around the society. To educate the general public, these programs
are aquring
a major role. As an example, arrival of world panedemic
of COVID19
, through campaings
, health services provided all the important information and the appropriate procedures to eliminate and eradicate the disease from the society.Mostly, these health
campaings
were conducted through mass media. This can be TV programs
, social media, text messages etc. As these programs
are publically
conducted, depending on capacity of peoples understanding, message can be commiunicated
incorrectly. In such cases, the the
relevan
prevntion
methods will not be followed properly. If the given message is incorrect, that might lead to an unwanted fear within the society which an
directly effecting
for the contries
economy.As an example,
Due to
panademic
of COVID 19
, people were unnecessarily excited about the lockdown situation which directly impacted on their buying behaviors
.To sum up, the public health
campaings
have disadvantages which can lead to unnecessary fear, bout advantages outweigh the disadvantages.