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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay addresses the task but lacks a clear stance and has several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by unclear transitions, and vocabulary usage is limited with some informal expressions.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors67
Grammatical range and accuracy39
Lexical resource20
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response5

Writing Task

#Sport
#Agree / Disagree
Hosting international sports events like the Olympics or the FIFA World Cup is often seen as a prestigious achievement that can put a country on the world map. It is believed to boost the economy through tourism and global recognition. However, these events can also be incredibly costly, often requiring infrastructure that may not be used post-event.
Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of hosting international sports events outweigh the costs?

Submitted Answer

Words356|Paragraphs4
English:US English
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Thesis Statement
International Sports hosting is something that has always been
dream
for the
small
countries
. The host of sports
events
like
Olympic
and FiFa world cup
are
considered as the big achievement which will also help the
country
to be
recognised
. These
hosting
countries
will have a lot of benefits but the cost of it is very
huge
which will be
hard
for
small
countries
to earn them back. In
this
essay
we will discuss
both agreements and disagreements related to
hosting
and
it's
cost.
First of all,whenever any international
event
is
organised
by a
country
it gains a lot of recognition and also visitors to witness those programs.
Economy
of the
country
is known to be
upsurge
from the money
spend
by
visitors
which is similar to the expenses.
Similarly
those visitors search hotels for staying, they buy tickets of the stadium,
ecetra
. For
instance
from my own
experience
whenever any SAARC games
happens
in
Nepal
the
earings
of that time get boomed. This all will lead to the tourism business
increased
for
whole
year
which will help in
economy
and cover the cost of sports hosting.
However,the expenditure that is required for these
events
are
huge which is not
fullfilled
with
small
amount of money. If the
country
's economic condition is not
good than
sometimes expenses maybe higher than the income because not every tourist
visit
to the
another
country
for such
events
. There may be many benefits of getting
recognised
and
increase
in tourist
flow
nevertheless it is not beneficial until it
lead
to the increase in
economy
.
Hosting
very big
events
in
small
countries
are
more risky as they cannot manage the need of the
people
that
's
what exactly happened in Quatar last year's world cup. So before the
event
one should
analyse
its income and expenditure properly.
Recognition comes with
alot
of expenses with it. Some
country
may get more money than it has
spend
on the
event
however
hosting
the program that harms own
country
's
economy
is not worth it.
In my opinion
a
country
should be properly
analysed
before giving permission to
them

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