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Coherence & cohesion	5.0
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Writing Task

#Sport

#Agree / Disagree

Hosting international sports events like the Olympics or the FIFA World Cup is often seen as a prestigious achievement that can put a country on the world map. It is believed to boost the economy through tourism and global recognition. However, these events can also be incredibly costly, often requiring infrastructure that may not be used post-event.

Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of hosting international sports events outweigh the costs?

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Thesis Statement

International Sports hosting is something that has always been

dream

for the

small

countries

. The host of sports

events

Olympic

and FiFa world cup

are

considered as the big achievement which will also help the

country

to be

recognised

. These

hosting

countries

will have a lot of benefits but the cost of it is very

huge

which will be

hard

for

small

countries

to earn them back. In

this

essay

we will discuss

both agreements and disagreements related to

hosting

and

it's

cost.

First of all,whenever any international

event

organised

by a

country

it gains a lot of recognition and also visitors to witness those programs.

Economy

of the

country

is known to be

upsurge

from the money

spend

visitors

which is similar to the expenses.

Similarly

those visitors search hotels for staying, they buy tickets of the stadium,

ecetra

. For

instance

from my own

experience

whenever any SAARC games

happens

Nepal

the

earings

of that time get boomed. This all will lead to the tourism business

increased

for

whole

year

which will help in

economy

and cover the cost of sports hosting.

However,the expenditure that is required for these

events

are

huge which is not

fullfilled

with

small

amount of money. If the

country

's economic condition is not

good than

sometimes expenses maybe higher than the income because not every tourist

visit

to the

another

country

for such

events

. There may be many benefits of getting

recognised

and

increase

in tourist

flow

nevertheless it is not beneficial until it

lead

to the increase in

economy

Hosting

very big

events

small

countries

are

more risky as they cannot manage the need of the

people

that

what exactly happened in Quatar last year's world cup. So before the

event

one should

analyse

its income and expenditure properly.

Recognition comes with

alot

of expenses with it. Some

country

may get more money than it has

spend

on the

event

however

hosting

the program that harms own

country

economy

is not worth it.

In my opinion

country

should be properly

analysed

before giving permission to

them

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Total Errors	67
Grammatical range and accuracy	39
Lexical resource	20
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	5