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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks a clear stance and has several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by unclear transitions, and vocabulary usage is limited with some informal expressions.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 67 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 39 | |
| Lexical resource | 20 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Writing Task
#Sport
#Agree / Disagree
Hosting international sports events like the Olympics or the FIFA World Cup is often seen as a prestigious achievement that can put a country on the world map. It is believed to boost the economy through tourism and global recognition. However, these events can also be incredibly costly, often requiring infrastructure that may not be used post-event.
Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of hosting international sports events outweigh the costs?
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
dream
for the small
countries
. The host of sports events
like Olympic
and FiFa world cup are
considered as the big achievement which will also help the country
to be recognised
. These hosting
countries
will have a lot of benefits but the cost of it is very huge
which will be hard
for small
countries
to earn them back. In this
essay
we will discuss
both agreements and disagreements related to hosting
and
it's
cost.First of all,whenever any international
event
is organised
by a country
it gains a lot of recognition and also visitors to witness those programs. Economy
of the country
is known to be upsurge
from the money spend
by visitors
which is similar to the expenses. Similarly
those visitors search hotels for staying, they buy tickets of the stadium,ecetra
. For instance
from my own experience
whenever any SAARC games happens
in Nepal
the earings
of that time get boomed. This all will lead to the tourism business increased
for whole
year
which will help in economy
and cover the cost of sports hosting.However,the expenditure that is required for these
events
are
huge which is not fullfilled
with small
amount of money. If the country
's economic condition is not good than
sometimes expenses maybe higher than the income because not every tourist visit
to the
another country
for such events
. There may be many benefits of getting recognised
and increase
in tourist flow
nevertheless it is not beneficial until it lead
to the increase in economy
. Hosting
very big
events
in small
countries
are
more risky as they cannot manage the need of the people
that
's
what exactly happened in Quatar last year's world cup. So before the event
one should analyse
its income and expenditure properly.Recognition comes with
alot
of expenses with it. Some country
may get more money than it has spend
on the event
however
hosting
the program that harms own country
's economy
is not worth it. In my opinion
a country
should be properly analysed
before giving permission to them