IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6
IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
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The essay addresses the question and provides a clear opinion, but it has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but some ideas could be better organized and developed with more clarity.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
countries
with
various purpose. Some roam for amusement, few of them visit to feel the nature, and many might travel with the intention to learn the culture of that very country
. Here arise a plethora of questions about how can an individual comprehend the traditions of the particular place. It creates dilemma
whether the person
needs to understand the tongue of person
residing there or not.I believe that
jargon
of a country
can never disrupt one from familiarising
one self
with the customs. The visitor can hire a language translator person
in order to gain explicit knowledge. He/She will also get the facility to appoint a tourist guide
which can turn out to be an amazing
deal for them because the explorer is acknowledged with the heritage and history of the country
. This way the foreigner won't
return with dearth
of folk information. In addition to these, internet
would be of great advantage to acquire the desired cultural wisdoms
. Being a people person
can turn out to be cardinal because interaction with local or native people will lead you to tremendous opportunities to learn one's civilization's way of life. Although the traveler may not grasp their talk , but human language is something that can be felt and understood. This can be memorable and valuable simultaneously
as the person
will learn few language words of that country
. The tourist may encounter hidden gems of the country
with the assistance of natives. The richness of one's customs is more known to the citizens rather than internet
or anything else , so socialising
with them is the best way possible to gain custom values.In a nutshell, enthusiasm is all one
need
to be acquainted with the traditional beliefs of the community and the will to overcome any barrier. There are diverse routes to ascertain the country
's culture.