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The essay addresses the question but lacks a clear thesis statement and logical flow. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, with several errors and limited range.
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| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
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| Task response | 5 |
Writing Task
#Family
#Agree / Disagree
Family support is often seen as crucial for educational success, but self-motivation is also a key factor.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that family support is more important than self-motivation for success in education?
Submitted Answer
Words214|Paragraphs4
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
thinks
that the main key for a successful education results is the family
's main job. While, other
see that self
-encouragement is a main activity for success.On one hand,
family
support
is somthing
no one can give up about
. Being surrounded by supportive people whom close to you as your family
is such a heart-warming. Experienced ones such as your father,mother or your elder brother having a lot of past-life experiences would have a lot of impact. As a result of, giving you quantity of tips and advices
mitigating a bit from you the educational tasks and daily stress of school or college.On the
other
hand, without proper self
-motivation and focusing a person will acheive
nothing. Whereas, finishing a particular assignment or attending to classes on time, that can not
be done with family
support
only. Everyone should have the characteristic
and motives of being successful
not only relying on the other
's support
, which i
personally agree with.To summarize, both
family
-support
and self
-motivation are substantial for educational and overall life success. That is to say, they both are
psychological support
that relay on each other
. Although, without self
-support
acheiving
educational goals is predominantly rough.