IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay provides a clear opinion but lacks detailed examples and evidence to support the argument. There are several grammatical errors and issues with coherence and cohesion, which affect readability and overall effectiveness.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
The debate on whether video games promote aggressive behavior in players has been ongoing. While some studies suggest a correlation, others see them as harmless entertainment.
Do you agree or disagree that playing video games leads to increased aggression among individuals?
#Entertainment
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:154
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
game
has
taken over the market and has a rumour that it promotes aggressive behavior
in players. This has started a huge controversy among gamers and non-gamers. But in my opinion
game
is just a source of enterainment
and has nothing to do with promoting aggressive behavior
.The main purpose of video
game
is to provide a relaxing time to the user. It not only entertain
the user but help
them to think critically and build logic. The research has found that the one who play
games
has faster response time than that of other
.Gamers nature differs
fom
the game
they play
. If someone plays
strategy
board game
then their nature will be calm and their thinking will be critical. If someone plays
action game
then their nature will be talkactive
and their thinking will be logical and their
their response will be faster than usual person.