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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in idea development and examples. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, with frequent errors and limited range affecting clarity and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 43 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 19 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Social media platforms are a ubiquitous part of modern life, influencing various aspects of social interaction, business, and politics.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.
#Technology
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
social
media
has a great role in influencing the how
people communicate and work. Nowadays, It has become the most important thing to the humans and become the basic requirement for them. Undoubtly
, public network has alot
of benefits but
it comes along with
some disadvantages as well.Surely,
media
has uncountable advantages
but some of the major importance are, It has become the key thing through which people can intereact
with eachother
around the globe. Only with the help of internet
and mobile, mankind are able to talk with
any of their friends and relatives living in each and every corner of the world. As most of the persons
are connected to the internet, businesses can advertise their products through mass media
and can attract the wider range of customer
. Platforms such as
facebook
and twitter
are also very useful to put the thoughts of the citizens towards the works of their government and reach out to them.Along with
the positive impact
it also has some negative impact towards
the population. As all of the generations from around the earth can be connected through networking sites there
is high
chance of its misuse. There is probability of social
crimes such as
cyberbullying and phising
. Everyone knows that the user of these platforms such as
instagram
and snapchat
has
trend
to show off their belongings and themselves
which results to
unrealistic living among them. There are many cases of patient
having bad health problems like headache
along with
psychological problems like anxiety, depression because of longer engagement in social
media
and cut from reality.In conclusion, there are pros of
social
media
which is
very beneficial for us
but the cons should not be ignored.