IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, and the essay could benefit from better coherence and more structured development of ideas.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Teachers play a critical role in the success of online education, and their ability to adapt to digital teaching methods is crucial.
How well do teachers adapt to online teaching platforms, and what kind of support do they need to improve?
#Online Education
#Direct Question
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:275
Paragraphs:1
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Thesis Statement
technology
is very important
. You can see technology
everywhere in this world such as smartphone, laptop, smart watch
, and others. Due to the Covid-19 incident, students
must stay inside their home and
they are not allowed to go outside. This can affect their studies at school. The government decided to do a digital teaching
method where students
can study
inside their house. The teachers
will guide and teach the students
through an online application where they can do a video call group. Eventually, some teachers
might find it hard
to teach
since most of them rarely use technology
. The teachers
need to study
about how technology
works so it does not hinder the learning process. They can watch some tutorial videos about technology
. But that is not the only problem about digital teaching
, students
can feel very bored when they study
online. The teachers
have to make
the students
feel interested and excited with their own teaching
techniques. For example, make
an interactive studying
techniques, learn while playing, make
funny jokes, give an extra point if they get it right, and many other things. The students
can also give their own opinion and suggestions about the teacher
's teaching
techniques so that the teacher
can improve more. By having a supportive
students
, the teacher
will be more excited to teach and the teaching
quality will increase. There are plenty ways
to make
studying
online very fun and comfortable
depends on how you manage to do it. It might be hard at first but
if you learn how to make
online studying
fun, you don't
need to worry about anything anymore
.