IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence due to numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While it covers key safety concerns and suggests measures, the ideas are not fully developed or well-organized, and the vocabulary is limited and sometimes inaccurately used.

Overall score	5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy	4.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Public Transport

#Direct Question

Safety concerns are a significant barrier to the adoption of public transport for many individuals.

How safe is public transport, and what measures can be taken to enhance its safety?

Submitted Answer

Words224|Paragraphs6

English:

Global Issues:

Word Count Requirement

Formality

Task Response

Readability

Coherence

Cohesion

Vocabulary Usage

Grammar Range

Ideas Development

Logical Flow

Paragraph 1 Issues:

Thesis Statement

In this fast word most people are getting concern about the safety measurements to travel in the

public

transport

as it might not be safe for everyone.

In additional,

Public

transport

is part of the modern urban life, offering the

afforable

price and

environment friendly

way to travel from one place to the other. However, safety

corncern

offen

discourege

people from using it.

Paragraph 3 Issues:

Missing Linking Devices

One part of the primary concern is the risk of involving

into

an accident. Buses, train, trams operate in high-traffic areas. Some of these

issues

are poor maintains are carried out which

conributes

to safety hazards. Government should

invertes

mordern

transportation system and ensure proper

maintances

work is carried out.

Paragraph 4 Issues:

Missing Linking Devices

Another major

issues

is personal security. Theft, harassment and violence on

public

transport

creates and unsafe environment,

specialy

for

childerns

and women, to overcome these

issues

authories

should install CCTV

camera

and emergency response should be set in

public

transport

which can improve in

passengers

confidence.

Another

issues

clear signage. All

transport

should have proper signage indicating the emergency exist, assistance.

Government

should also consider the accessible to people with

disablilities

To conclude, while

public

transport

is generally safe, some risk factors are there which

needs

to be solved and government should monitor all

transport

which can help in reducing in traffic and

public

feels

safe while

traveling

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Total Errors	42
Grammatical range and accuracy	14
Lexical resource	18
Coherence & cohesion	5
Task response	5