IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in idea development and coherence. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity and precision, while the essay's structure could be improved for better logical flow.

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Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Youth Crime

#Problem / Solution

Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.

What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

Submitted Answer

Words259|Paragraphs4

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Thesis Statement

In these modern times, the number of young

individual

involved in wrongdoing is increasing all over the world.

This essay will discuss

the

reasons

and possible solutions

this problem.

In today's fast-faced world, the technology had the most influential

devices

that every

individual

is using. In other words, this is one of the

reason

increasing

number

youth

involved in a crime. For instance, in social media everyone has access

which can lead to several

problems

such us,

cyber bullying

and data privacy. In addition, this can be the

reason

why the students, stop their studies.

Furthemore

, one of the

reason

is lack of guidance and support from the family, which is the first foundation in building a positive environment.

The

government

must provide a

solution

providing

a regulation that can help the

individual

to stop involving in the crime. For instance, implementing

a restrictions

below 18 years old

social media can have

positive

impact

the young generation.

this

action from the

government

will reduce the number of

offense

the

youth

especially

in the social medial platforms.In

addtion

, the

government

must provide a

counseling

and support to all parents and the whole family, to encourage the

youth

to be a good

individual

not just in their country but in the whole world.

In conclusion, the

government

and the family of every teenager

plays

vital

role in shaping their attitude, belief, goals, and help them to be an

optiomistic

youth

not just in the community but also in their academic studies.

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Total Errors	44
Grammatical range and accuracy	23
Lexical resource	11
Coherence & cohesion	5
Task response	5