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The essay addresses the task but lacks a clear thesis statement and has issues with coherence and cohesion. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and formality.

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Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Business & Money

#Direct Question

Investing in employee training can yield substantial benefits for a company, but it also involves certain risks and costs.

What are the benefits of investing in employee training? What are the potential drawbacks?

Submitted Answer

Words259|Paragraphs4

English:

Global Issues:

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Task Response

Readability

Coherence

Cohesion

Vocabulary Usage

Grammar Range

Ideas Development

Logical Flow

Paragraph 1 Issues:

Thesis Statement

In these modern times, some of the

employer

provides

training

to equipped their

employees

. However, there are people who believe that this is a waste of time, especially when the person

resign

to the

company

On the one hand, some

companies

invest in their

staff

providing

enough

seminars

and

workshop

that can produce a better and the best

employee

in the

company

. Furthermore, those

training

provided

by the management will benefit both the

company

and the

staff

. For instance, some private

employers

provide

the

microsoft

training

for all the

employees

to reduce backlogs and to help them to make their

task

easier. Also, they

provide

seminar

to their

staff

based on their needs, such as, public speaking

training

, managerial workshop and

other

trainings

that can help the

staff

to become productive in their job.

On the

other

hand,

there

some drawbacks of investing to

employees

. Firstly, when the

staff

resign

the

company

or transfer

the

other

industry. In

other

words, all the

trainings

will be useless. For instance, based on my experienced last 2020, my

employer

provides

me all the

trainings

and

seminars

, but at the end of the

year

I resigned since I got a new offer which is the highest salary.

can be noted that the resignation of the

employees

is one of the negative

impact

for

the

employers

In conclusion,

providing

enough

trainings

and

seminars

staff

will

improved

their productivity in the

company

. However, I believe that resignation is one of the biggest negative

factor

in investing in the

employees

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Total Errors	35
Grammatical range and accuracy	17
Lexical resource	11
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	4