IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay would benefit from better coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 33 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
While online education is versatile, not all subjects may be effectively taught through this medium. Some areas of study might benefit more from traditional, in-person learning environments.
Discuss the effectiveness of online learning across different subjects and identify which are better suited to traditional learning environments.
#Online Education
#Discussion
Submitted Answer
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Words:182
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
generation
technology has advanced a lot.Different fields have been affected by the advancement of the technology.Education
is also the major field that has been the target of this kind of system.Missing Linking Devices
Online
education
is being popular day by day and different subjects
can be taught
easily with the online
system.nline
education
is versatile, not all subjects
may be effectively taught
through this medium. Some areas of study might benefit more from traditional, in-person learning environments. Those subjects
like chemistry and physics should be taught
by the old method in my opinion. These are the subject
which focuses
of
practical
knowledge rather than the therotical
knowledge
but in the online
education
teaching
practical
can be difficult and monotonous. Different apparstus
may be required in order to perform the practical
but
it is not guarented
that each and every student have
all those
required equipment in order to perform the experiment. So, all those subject
which includes
practical
knowledege
can be benefited if it is taught
from the old traditional method rather than online
system.