IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. Grammar and vocabulary usage need improvement, and the essay should be more formal and structured to enhance readability and logical flow.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 42 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 18 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Investing in public transport can lead to significant economic advantages for a city by reducing traffic congestion and pollution. However, establishing an efficient and wide-reaching public transport system can also present considerable challenges.
Do you agree or disagree that the economic benefits of developing public transport outweigh the challenges?
#Public Transport
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:6
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Thesis Statement
In the recent years, traffic
problems
and pollution are in the top list of nature
changes however,
to tackle these unwanted
problems
government
are looking for
public
transport
which led people to
travel
safe as well as it helps to grow economic status of the country.
i
partially agree with the statement.At first, there are some
problem
while investing in public
transport
because the private owners of the vehicle
protest against government
as well as it makes
significant changes for the vehicle
company which degrade their sells
. due
to public
vehicle
it is not queit
impressive and uneasy to travel
long journey. use
of these
public
vehicle
may transport some viruses and flu. as
for example
In the previous time ram used his car for travel a long distance which
makes
him happy and safetly
but these public
transport
makes
him uneasy to travel
due to noise and crowd.on the other hand, there are numerous benefits of using
public
transport
for individual as well as government
too.firstly, it
help
to minimize traffic problem
and reduce the carbon dioxide emission which makes
the enviroment
fresh. secondly
,it helps to maintain cost of the passenger and known as ecofriendly
which led people to travel
without financial issue. at
last , it make
government
easy to maintain the problem
related to construction of road and it the
expenses is reduced and government
is able to utilize these resources on various infrastructure like hospital, school etc.Missing Linking Devices
problem
make
country free from pollution and global issue.