IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. There are numerous grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage, which affect readability and overall task response.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Many people change their diet due to health advice, personal beliefs, or other factors.
Have you ever changed your diet for any reason? What impact did it have on you?
#Food
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Thesis Statement
thier
diet with persnal
beliefs, to follow health advice from elder or medical professionals, and other factors. It impacts on them with advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand, when
human
get a problem in heath they
took
advices
from thier
doctors to be cured. I have also changed my diet so many times like whenever I get sick or face problems in
my body
, I took
medicines with doctor's suggestions avoid having affectable
foods
in
that time. Which helped me to get my old fit body
faster. One of my aunt
is sugar patient, so she only eats sugar free
foods
to maintain sugar in her body
. I also have seen people not having onions and garlic by trusting that causes allergy in thier
body
.On the other hand, most of the person avoid heavy calories
foods
by believing that causes
different health issues. For instance, gaining weight, food
poison, and diarrhea
are bad impacts of having junk foods
and other oily meals. Talking about these impacts, whenever i
have heavy fast foods
, it makes me to go rest room
again and again.In conclusion, I believe that people change
thier
diet due to health issues, to maintain thier
physical body
and individual beliefs.