IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks coherence and cohesion, with frequent grammatical errors and informal language. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, and the essay would benefit from clearer structure and more varied sentence forms.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 44 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 18 | |
| Lexical resource | 18 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
More and more people are using the internet to contact existing friends and even make new friends. Some people are of the opinion that this has strengthened relationships between existing friends, whilst others think the opposite is true.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
#Technology
#Discussion
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
internet
has been the major aspects and basic needs of human beings. It has made
our life more convenient. With reagrds
to this, i
am going to discuss
the above topic in the essay as well as offer my point of view
.To begin with,
communication
is the major facility which is provided by the internet
. Several websites like facebook
, instagaram
many more are operated due to internet
. People
get a chance to explore with new people
form different countires
. To illustrate , if i
send the freind
request to another people
from another countries or my own county and when they accpet
our request then
we can talk to each other easily. we
can be friends
with many more people
from whom we are unknown about.Through this
we can make
new friends
.on the other hand, many youths used to have a conversation with their childhood
friends
even though they are at a long distance from each other. Through communication
they can share their feelings , opinion
and this may develop the strong bond between friends
. for
instance, me and my best friend
subash
used to live in different countries but
we used to have a chat in facebook
where we talk about our study , childhood memories and many more. Internet
has made
all this happened. It helps to connect the people
. it
decarese
the communication
gap between the people
.To conclude,
Internet
has played a vital role in our daily life. Personally , i belive
that it has created a strong bond between existing friend
by having a conversation through online. In this busy world nobody have a time to make
a visits
to their friends
or relatives home but internet
has solved this problem thorugh
online communication
. people
can have a talk by sitting in their home through the access of internet
.