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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the task by discussing both justifications and arguments against space exploration, but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. Grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect readability, while vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 35 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 20 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
While the high costs of space exploration are often justified by the potential benefits, there are also considerable arguments against spending vast amounts of resources on such endeavors.
What are the justifications for the high costs of space missions and what are the arguments against such expenditure?
#Space Exploration
#Direct Question
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:320
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
in
space
exploration
, both the sides arguing for and against such
endeavors
have plenty of good reasonings
to put forward. While cost of
space
exploration
can be
justfied
by its
scientific
imporatance
and its potential ability to discover
new
resources out in
space
, many of those who are against
such
spendings claim that, more compelling
scientific
research are in need of funds and discredit
these
exploration
as
labeling
them as
political
stunts.
Space
exploration
is one of the supreme achievements of modern science and humankind in general. The outstanding accumulation of knowledge and resources that are required
to perform such
feat
exempifies
what human
will do. Space
explorations
are unveiling new
facts about the universe, and also motivating scientists and technicians to invent new
forms of techonology
that will make space
exloration
easier and more functional. Space
exploration
might uncover new
sources of energy and various materials which will further makeHowever, apart from centuries if not several
millenia
long systematic queries into nature and science, it requires
a lot of political
motivations to put together the vast amount of resources that is required
for such
explorations
. It has been seen that political
superpowers after the second world war have funded these endeavors
to create political
rhetorics
for gaining support from general
populace. However, there are various fields in science that require
funds. Medicine, environmental research, renewable energy, or sustainable material discoveries are just some examples of such
fields that can have direct impact on human life. Thus, those who argue against public funding of space
exploration
are promoting to fund other scientific
fields, and declining to support the superiority show of space
explorations
.Thus, it is very much
impotant
to have a balanced policy for funding scientific
research. Involving more scientists in administrations, rather than relying solely on politicians
may not be a good idea for managing academic and scientific
affairs.