IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic and contain several errors, affecting readability and overall effectiveness.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
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| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 35 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
In recent years, organic foods have gained popularity due to their perceived health benefits. However, they often come with a higher price tag compared to non-organic options.
Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of organic foods justify their higher cost?
#Food
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
organic
foods
has skyrocketed due to the many benefits . Many people
have got
a lesson by using non-organic
food
which affect the entire body system. As the rapid increasement
in the organic
foods
,the price
of them has also
increase
rapidly . I totallly
agree with this statement.To begin,after
getting
bad effect from the packed or non-organic
food
, individual believe in the organic
foods
which help every one from different aspects . People
are getting
more health benefits from these types
product
. These foods
also
help people
to overcome from problem realted
to diseases. For instances
after the use of organic
products diseases such as:
lungs problem, indigestion and mental issue have been solved in recent years
.However,the
increasement
in the organic
foods
as the price
of those foods
have also
been rose up. After getting
popularity from these foods
people
use this as a
income source and sold in the higher cost
and with higher price
tag which also
bring negativity in the environment . Additionally, after rise in costs
, consumer
cannot be able to pursue the food
and
they forced themself
to buy non-organic
food
. For instance
people
who cannot afford the food
which are in higher range . They have to buy the food
which cost
is little .In conclusion,
organic
foods
are essential of every individual. The climb in cost
of the food
may lead the popularity will declined
in the future. There should be average price
in all types of food
so that all people
can consume it.