IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

5.0
Overall Score
12 Jul 24, 09:44
Want to practice this question?
Go to IELTS Essay Checker

Overall Feedback

The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the ideas need better development and support.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors52
Grammatical range and accuracy27
Lexical resource14
Coherence & cohesion7
Task response4
Question
Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
#Business & Money
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:304
Paragraphs:5
Formality
Task Response
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Ideas Development
Logical Flow
Missing Linking Devices
Thesis Statement
In the Era of the modern
technology
all the works
are been
performed with the virtue of the
imternet
and technology.
Missing Linking Devices
Different organization uses various
online
platform
to conduct and attend the
meeting
. Various
online
platform
like zoom,meet are used widely for all the
online
meeting
.
Various business
organization
are shifting towards the
online
meeting
rather than those
tradtional
physical
meeting
as it is efficient and the time saving.
furthermore
,
meeting
being
online
companies are now able to attend the
meeting
from their desire place where they are more comfortable.
Demostrating
the product and the
geeting
feedback from the stoke holder has been eased with the
online
meeting
comparing
to the physical
meeting
. Now the
online
meeting
is been
conducted there
is
no any security threats or any restriction as all the
intrested
person can now be present
on
the
meeting
.
Even though
online
meeting
has made our task
easy
it has some of the negative aspects too. Firstly, in order to participate
on
the
online
meeting
there should be a strong internet connectivity throughout the
meeting
which may not be
poosible
sometimes and hinder the quality of the
meeting
. Being disconnected
everytime
may be
frastuating
and the whole
meeting
can be disturbed
due to
one person. Meeting policy and privacy
is
not secured in the
online
meeting
as some
annonymous
participant may enter the
meeting
and
disturbs
the whole
meeting
.
Every companies
may not be familiar with the
online
meeting
and cannot illustrate all those
project
to other companies and their internal relation may
be disturb
due to
the
online
meeting
.
In conclusion,
Due to
advancement of the
technology
online
meeting
are used
worldwidely
as it is easy as well as relevant than other form. In
contrast
meetings
privacy and the policy may be a bother
due to
the summit being
online
.

Boost Your English Exam Score.
Start Practicing Today.