IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the ideas need better development and support.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 52 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 27 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
#Business & Money
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:304
Paragraphs:5
Formality
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Cohesion
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Ideas Development
Logical Flow
Missing Linking Devices
Thesis Statement
technology
all the works are been
performed with the virtue of the imternet
and technology.Missing Linking Devices
online
platform
to conduct and attend the meeting
. Various online
platform
like zoom,meet are used widely for all the online
meeting
.Various business
organization
are shifting towards the
online
meeting
rather than those
tradtional
physical
meeting
as it is efficient and the time saving.
furthermore
,
meeting
being
online
companies are now able to attend the
meeting
from their desire place where they are more comfortable.
Demostrating
the product and the geeting
feedback from the stoke holder has been eased with the online
meeting
comparing
to the physical meeting
. Now the online
meeting
is been
conducted there is
no any security threats or any restriction as all the intrested
person can now be present on
the meeting
.Even though
online
meeting
has made our task easy
it has some of the negative aspects too. Firstly, in order to participate on
the online
meeting
there should be a strong internet connectivity throughout the meeting
which may not be poosible
sometimes and hinder the quality of the meeting
. Being disconnected everytime
may be frastuating
and the whole meeting
can be disturbed due to
one person. Meeting policy and privacy is
not secured in the online
meeting
as some annonymous
participant may enter the meeting
and disturbs
the whole meeting
. Every companies
may not be familiar with the online
meeting
and cannot illustrate all those project
to other companies and their internal relation may be disturb
due to
the online
meeting
.In conclusion,
Due to
advancement of the
technology
online
meeting
are used worldwidely
as it is easy as well as relevant than other form. In contrast
meetings
privacy and the policy may be a bother due to
the summit being online
.