IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks coherence and cohesion. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic and contain errors, affecting readability and overall effectiveness.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 37 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 16 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
As digital platforms continue to grow, many argue that traditional media like newspapers and television have lost their effectiveness in advertising.
Do you agree or disagree that traditional media are no longer effective advertising tools in the digital age?
#Media & Advertising
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:253
Paragraphs:5
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Thesis Statement
digital
technology is grown in many sectors. People
discuss that continue
growth of digital
platforms have
affected advertising
in traditional media like television
. I agree that traditional media are no longer effective advertising
tools in the digital
era because majority of
human being is
into the technology and different types of attractive features and designs
are shown in online.Missing Linking Devices
People
watch more mobile devices rather than television
for entertainment purpose and read online blogs. Where they find various ads of
different organization before they watch video and get something about the being released or upcoming things
poping
up of
the web when they are visiting websites.The way of
advertising
with so many features and aesthetic designs
have grabed
people
attention. With the help of online platforms, they are able to show these kind
of features are included in our company by making videos. In addition, how to use things
or what kind of items we should use that are useful in our daily life are being instructed online.In my opinion,
people
feel lazy to
read
books and not happy or being entertained
watching
television
which makes lost of
advertising
effectiveness in these
things
whereas
in
the online platform,
people
can show and do
things
with physical involvement with many
designs
to attract
people
.
In conclusion,
i
believe that growing digital
plaforms
are more effective for advertising
with attractive designs
comparing the lack of interest in newspaper and television
.