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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the topic but lacks clarity and coherence, with several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The ideas are not fully developed, and the vocabulary is limited, affecting the overall task response and readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 23 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Culture
#Direct Question
Cultural heritage encompasses traditions, sites, and artifacts that are valued for their historical, aesthetic, or cultural significance. Protecting these assets can be fraught with challenges.
What constitutes cultural heritage, and what are the challenges associated with its protection?
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of historical builds were replaced by modern skyscrapers and superstores to meet the rising needs of a growing population. Despite the advantages of protecting the heritage
, the challenges of reaching this goal are clear.The key point of
heritage
is the deposition of age. Although the definition of a cultural
heritage
can various from people's perspective, a procedure to make a wine known by
one children
can be considered a
heritage
, while a popular song with
more
than a million clicks
can not
be considered
heritage
.
The value of time is the most valuable asset which is hard
to create, no matter how advanced we are.Many argue that the modern technology can replace some old
tradition
in a more
efficiency way, which can help us to save more
places and times. However, hertiage
is a
accomplishment we can continue to benefits from our ancestors. Furthermore, In some developing countries, the government is willing to replace the historical builds with a hi-tech business centres to fulfil the fiscal commitments when they were in election. Since, the financial benefits have more
influence than some artifacts in a museum.Although It is difficult to find an equivalence point between the emotional value and economic value for the
heritage
, I believe as
year
passes,
more
and
more
people will realize how important these assets mean to us as other supplies become less and less required.
We can't
afford to lose the physical materials, ideas, skills and understandings of our past.