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The essay addresses the topic but lacks clarity and coherence, with numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Vocabulary is adequate but not varied, and the essay could benefit from more structured development of ideas and examples.

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Writing Task

#Culture

#Direct Question

Cultural heritage encompasses traditions, sites, and artifacts that are valued for their historical, aesthetic, or cultural significance. Protecting these assets can be fraught with challenges.

What constitutes cultural heritage, and what are the challenges associated with its protection?

Submitted Answer

Words275|Paragraphs4

English:

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Paragraph 1 Issues:

Thesis Statement

In modern epoch, the issue of culture protection has always been a matter of public interest.

could be obviously witnessed a phenomenon that

agreat

amout

of historical builds were replaced by modern skyscrapers and superstores to meet the rising needs

for

a growing population. Despite the advantages of protecting the cultural building, the challenges of reaching

this

goals are clear.

The definition of a cultural

heritage

can various from people's perspective, a procedure to make a wine known by

one children

can be

considerd

heritage

, while a popular song with

than a million clicks

can not

considerd

heritage

The key point of

heritage

is the deposition of

time

rather than the popularity. The value of

time

are

not easy

to create

matter how advanced we are.

Many argue that the modern technology can replace some old tradition in a more

effienciy

way, which can help us

saving

places and

times

however

hertiage

accompishment

we can continue to benefits from our ancestors. Furthermore, In some developing

countres

, the government

are

willing to replace the historical builds with a hi-tech business

centers

to fulfil the fiscal

commitements

when they were in election. Since, the financial benefits have

influence than some artifacts in a museum.

Although It is

hard

to find

equivalence point between the emotional value and economic value for the

hetitage

, I believe as

time

pass

and

people will realize how important these assets mean to us as other supplies become more and more abundant.

can not

afford to lose the physical materials, ideas, skills and understandings of our past.

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Total Errors	45
Grammatical range and accuracy	16
Lexical resource	20
Coherence & cohesion	5
Task response	4