IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks a clear thesis statement and logical flow, with some grammatical errors and limited vocabulary. Improved coherence and cohesion, along with more varied vocabulary and examples, would enhance the response.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others believe that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
#Culture
#Discussion
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:225
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
language
as an international official langauge
, than
firstly communication will be easier also there are some drawbacks regarding to
this like losing our identity.The advantages of having a single
language
, trade would be much more easier
and convenient, which can be really helpful in the economic growth of the countreis
also we can understand the emotion they are trying to express. And we do not have to learn many languages
. The main advantage will be in communicating with each other countries, like if
a someone
comes from a foreign country
and
we speak the same
language
than
communication and expressing the things we want, than we can have a better understanding.
On the other
hand
there are obvious issues regarding of having a single language
. First, a single language
can dominate the culture
which means that our way of persperctive
will be lost in viewing the cultures. Finally,this will also be a disadvantageous point for individuals with high linguistic intelligence since there are no other languages
for them to challenge their brain.In conclusion, there are plus points
tospeak
one
language
globally, including better understanding, trade facilitation, and decreasing discrimination.However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms
ofthe
loss of cultural diversity, the lack of motivation to explore the world, and a minus point for
language
intelligence.