IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
6.0
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19 Mar 25, 16:07
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The essay provides a clear opinion and addresses the task, but it lacks examples and has several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the essay could benefit from more logical flow and varied vocabulary.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 30 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Writing Task
#Youth Crime
#Agree / Disagree
The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Submitted Answer
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I thoroughly agree with
parenting
skills
causing a significant impact on reducing youth crimes
. Parenting
skills
, in my opinion
plays
the leading role in delvoping
a person's moral values. And since moral values enables
one to differentiate between right and wrong, it can be said that parenting
skills
directly influences
crime
rates among youth.Generally, a person spends their early stages of
life
with their parents
. It is the time they learn about social skills
, language skills
and moral values. It is the time one learns how to function as an active member of the society. The lessons the learn
at
that period lasts
forever. If parents
manages
to educate them about ethics and priciples
, the lessons are bound last for their lifetime. If parents
teach their children
about adverse
effects of crimes
, the children
are sure to abide by it for the years to come.However, I might not always be possible for the
parents
for educate children
all the time or keeping
an on their right and wrong actions. Education institutions can play a great part in this regrad
. They can officially teach the students about the negative effects of crimes
. How it eventually leads one life
towards destruction. They can train the students to self improvement
so that they can lead a diligent life
without leaning into crimes
.In conclusion, both
parents
and the school are the closest associates of the children
. They both heavily influence their future life
and personality. But parents
with their parenting
skills
leaves the most impact on a person's mind
which may help them not to get swayed by crimes
in future
.