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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay provides a clear opinion but lacks coherence and has numerous grammatical errors. The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the ideas are not well-developed or supported with examples.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 42 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 22 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
As digital platforms continue to grow, many argue that traditional media like newspapers and television have lost their effectiveness in advertising.
Do you agree or disagree that traditional media are no longer effective advertising tools in the digital age?
#Media & Advertising
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:277
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
newspapers
and television
have lost their effectiveness in advertising
. As we knew
Digital platforms continue to grow and upgrade day by day. We should also
upgrade ourselves respective to the modern
digital world. Advertising
is the very important
aspect of our modern
growing business
. As we know
it played vital
role in upgrading and development of business
.There were
lots
of way to advertised
the product
and goods of any particular company
. Newspapers
and Television is one most using method in recent times. In recent modern
times also
, Many
reknown
business
companies
,Agencies, Consultancy, Schools, Colleges mainly advertised
using newspaper
and television
. These advertising
means also
had help
their business
to grew as they targeted.Nowadays
also
many
people buy newspapers
to read as it had become habit of them. And many
many
people watches
televison
for many
purpose lke
entertainment,news,TV shows,Sports and many
more. So It means there is
lots
of chances and possibilites
in npaper
and television
for advertising
their product
. There are lots
of options or means for advertising
in modern
digital times. In my opinion
the company
or business
which are advertising
their product
and goods through the newspaper
and television
had no decrement in their business
. So it also
proved that their way of marketing the products
is more effective for them. There are other lots
of way to advertised
like online marketing which gave tough competion
to newspapaper
and television
in digital world. But many
company
prefer newspaper
and television
for advertising
so they could got
good profit and sales ans thyer
expected. So Newspaper and television
are effective for advertising
.