IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5

IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay provides a clear opinion but lacks coherence and has numerous grammatical errors. The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, and the ideas are not well-developed or supported with examples.

Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors42
Grammatical range and accuracy12
Lexical resource22
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4
Question
As digital platforms continue to grow, many argue that traditional media like newspapers and television have lost their effectiveness in advertising.
Do you agree or disagree that traditional media are no longer effective advertising tools in the digital age?
#Media & Advertising
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:277
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
I strongly disagree that traditional media like
newspapers
and
television
have lost their effectiveness in
advertising
. As we
knew
Digital platforms continue to grow and upgrade day by day. We should
also
upgrade ourselves respective to the
modern
digital world.
Advertising
is the
very important
aspect of our
modern
growing
business
. As we
know
it played
vital
role in upgrading and development of
business
.
There were
lots
of way to
advertised
the
product
and goods of any particular
company
.
Newspapers
and Television is one most using method in recent times. In recent
modern
times
also
,
Many
reknown
business
companies
,Agencies, Consultancy, Schools, Colleges mainly
advertised
using
newspaper
and
television
. These
advertising
means
also
had
help
their
business
to grew as they targeted.
Nowadays
also
many
people buy
newspapers
to read as it had become habit of them. And
many
many
people
watches
televison
for
many
purpose
lke
entertainment,news,TV shows,Sports and
many
more. So It means there
is
lots
of chances and
possibilites
in
npaper
and
television
for
advertising
their
product
. There are
lots
of options or means for
advertising
in
modern
digital times.
In my opinion
the
company
or
business
which are
advertising
their
product
and goods through the
newspaper
and
television
had no decrement in their
business
. So it
also
proved that their way of marketing the
products
is more effective for them. There are other
lots
of way to
advertised
like online marketing which gave tough
competion
to
newspapaper
and
television
in digital world. But
many
company
prefer
newspaper
and
television
for
advertising
so they could
got
good profit and sales ans
thyer
expected. So Newspaper and
television
are effective for
advertising
.