IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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14 Oct 24, 05:21
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Overall Feedback
The essay presents a clear opinion but lacks coherence and cohesion, with ideas not fully developed or logically organized. Grammar and vocabulary usage are limited, with several errors affecting clarity and formality is inconsistent.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Reality TV shows are immensely popular worldwide, yet often criticized for promoting superficiality and dramatic behavior. Critics believe these shows negatively influence viewers' perceptions of reality and culture.
Do you agree or disagree that reality TV shows have a predominantly negative impact on our culture?
#Entertainment
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:224
Paragraphs:1
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Thesis Statement
I do agree.
Reality
tv
shows
have a negative impact in
our culture
because
of the lack of aunthenticity
. The influence of reality
tv
shows
in our culture
specialy
in younger generations need immediate attention due to the fact that they based their plans and goals solely in what they have seen on national television. They tend to have unrealistic aspirations. As a matter of fact, it may cause depression. And more often than not
it is discovered in the later time when they could not handle it anymore
and choose to do something that may harm them or regret for the rest of their lives. For instance, some may resort to taking illegal drugs, getting themselves involve in crimes, and worse is committing suicide. Their actions could also affect their family. They might blame themselves for not paying enough attention to their child or children. The excruciating pain because
of grief that it may give to the parents has also a significant impact in their everyday lives. Finally, reality
tv
shows
can impact our culture
negatively because
of the lack of respect and knowledge about ones' own culture
. Culture
that had been followed by our ancestors and our parents up to this day and just being ignored by younger generations because
of the great influence of social media and these reality
tv
shows
.