IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
6.0
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The essay addresses the question but contains several grammatical errors and lacks examples. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the argument could be more logically developed and supported with specific examples.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
The possibility of future threats from space, such as asteroids, is sometimes used to justify investment in space exploration. Others feel this is an overblown justification for the expenditure.
Do you agree or disagree that protecting against extraterrestrial threats justifies current levels of investment in space exploration?
#Space Exploration
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:209
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
unforseen
cosmic phenomena couls
have catastrophic consequences for our planet. Preparing for these possibilities is undoubtedly important and reflects a proactive approach to ensuring the long-term survival of humanity.However, it is crucial to recognize that there are more
urget
problem
that demand our immediate attention and resources. Climate change, for instance, poses an exitential
threat to out
planet. Rising temperature, extreme weather and melting ice caps are already having devastating effects on ecosystem, economies, and communities worldwide. Adressing
climate change requires substantial investment in reneable
energy, sustainable practices, and global cooperation.similarly, the quest for world peace is an ongoing challenge that affects millions of lives. Poverty is also another critical issues that cannot be
overloked
.These problems are examples of real problems we
a
are currently facing. they
impact the daily lives of billions of people and require immediate action and resources. therefore
, while investing in space exploration is not entirely wrong and has its own merits, we should prioritize more important issues. By focusing on climate change, world peace, and povery
, we can create a more just, sustainable, and secure world for future genertations
.