IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks clarity and coherence in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic and contain errors, affecting readability and overall effectiveness.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
There is a perspective that developed nations should lead global environmental conservation efforts due to their resources and capabilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that developed nations should take the lead in global environmental conservation efforts?
#Environment
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:165
Paragraphs:1
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Thesis Statement
developed
nations
should lead global
environmental consveration
because they have advanced resources
and capabilities. The resources
can be taken as the technology, human resources
and economy. It can influence their capabilities, for instance their military has high equipments to protect the environment especially
in protecting from the consveration
, especially for the global
environmental. The other example also can be taken from their human
resources
which
has
high achievement in education in doing research about environmental issues, so they can do multiple research to control the
global
environmental conservation before doing an action to face the
global
environmental
consveration
.
In addition, the researchers need funds to do the research in which it can be done by the developed
nations
which have high economy income. Developed nation
also can
be helped by developing
nations
because this issue happens globally, both developed
and developing
country
should work together to solve the issue. So, they can work hand in hand to face the global
environmental consveration
.