IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the role of humor in society and its boundaries but lacks clarity and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay should be more formal and structured for better readability.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 39 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 18 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Humor plays a crucial role in entertainment, providing laughter and relief. However, the boundaries of what is considered humorous can be contentious.
What role does humor play in society, and what boundaries should it respect?
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Submitted Answer
English:
Words:288
Paragraphs:3
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Formality
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Usage
Ideas Development
Logical Flow
Thesis Statement
helps
one get rid of tention
, give advice to others in a way the wont
find offending, or a way for entertainment. A bit of light
humour
is something everyone should have as nowadays stressing all day about work or future might cause
seious
helath
problems, which for the serious working ethic
people
can be
seen as
missing a day of work for no reason.
One should understand that the purpose of humour
is not just entertainment, it is so much more from telling someone their weaknesses to giving them advice
both can be done using
humour
as a tool.Humour
helps
people
get along, make
freidns
and acquaintances alongside
helping
new
people
integrate into a group as such I highly believe one should have a bit of
humourous
personality as it can
help
soothe both your and others brain,and worries.
One could argue
though that not everyone has the gift of humour
, and it is definitely not a piece of cake to integrate into your everyday language in the right amount. It helps
people
get rid of worries about work, stress,and everyday life as well.The boundaries
humour
should resect in my
opinion
are not making fun about
someones
family, or
circumstances
alongside making sure to keep it at a light level instead of
using
it to damage the other
parties
reputation, once you keep these things in
mind
you'll
be
using
humour
in your
every day
life.
Honestly i
believe humpur
is a good way to talk to someone whether he has a grumpy peronality
, or an outgoing one. Though
one could argue thatthe
rules regarding humour
and using
it differ according to the person you are talking to.