IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay presents a personal opinion but lacks clear examples and detailed support for its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity, and the essay's coherence and cohesion could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 39 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 19 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Sport
#Agree / Disagree
Hosting international sports events like the Olympics or the FIFA World Cup is often seen as a prestigious achievement that can put a country on the world map. It is believed to boost the economy through tourism and global recognition. However, these events can also be incredibly costly, often requiring infrastructure that may not be used post-event.
Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of hosting international sports events outweigh the costs?
Submitted Answer
Words268|Paragraphs4
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Missing Linking Devices
Thesis Statement
international
sport
events
have
some advantages, especially the event
could increase gross domestic product throughout tourism
sector and could gain an attention from world wide
. But to achieve the benefits, the preparation for infrastructure is need
a high cost that may not be used in the future. I believe that to get a global recognition, we must plan in a structured manner so the event
will be held effectively and efficiently and
it will not be wasteful.Paragraph 2 Issues:
Missing Linking Devices
impact
of international
sport
events
is undeniable, we have got so many success stories from any other
countries about their international
sport
events
. we
will get known by the world through tourism
sector. particularly
by our uniqueness culture and there will be big economic cycle during the event
.On the
other
hand, the cost of the planning and preparation of the international
sports event
is so enermous
, especially in build
infrastructure, accessibilities, and amenities. The government also have
many programs priorities that should be consider
, instead of prepare
a grand event
that took times
and budget.To gain a big
impact
of
international
sport
events
, the government should plan it well and precise to make sure that the result will have positive
impact
in all aspects, like
accomodations
, mode of transportations, food chains, MSMe, and any
other
sectors
and
also we could use the ex venue of the
international
event
for any
other
occasion, in the hope that the
impact
will be
sustain
and there will be no budget waste because of the post
event
will
left
many building that will not be used as per our
fearness
.