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The essay provides a relevant discussion on government regulations but lacks a clear personal opinion and examples. Improvements in grammar accuracy and coherence are needed for a higher score.

Overall score	5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	6.0
Task response	6.0

Writing Task

#Work

#Agree / Disagree

Government regulations are often implemented to protect workers and consumers, but some argue that they can stifle business freedom and innovation, potentially affecting job creation.

Do you agree or disagree that government regulations do more harm than good in the job market?

Submitted Answer

Words265|Paragraphs3

English:

Global Issues:

Paragraph Count Requirement

Opinion Required

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Thesis Statement

Government

regulations

are important for the job

market

. Where there are no

government

regulations

, import and export of goods and services will move freely. When

export

increase

and exceed

import

there

will be

increase

production

. When

production

increases

there

will be a

higher

demand for raw materials and labour.

On the other hand, when imports exceed exports,

the

will be

higher

competition for the goods and services produced in the

domestic

market

. The

production

cost

in the

domestic

market

can be

higher

depending

the

prices

of the imported

products

. When the

prices

of the imported

products

are lower than the

prices

of the

prices

of the locally produced goods and services, the

domestic

companies

may be forced to closed down or try to reduce

cost

production

. Measures that will be taken to reduce

production

cost

includes reduction of labour

cost

. Such a measure will mean laying off employees. Therefore, it is important that

government

implement

regulations

tarifs

to protect workers and consumers and control anti-dumping.

Government

regulations

and set

price

ceiling for some

products

in the

domestic

market

to prevent cartel and monopolistic activities on dominant

companies

. When the

domestic

market

control

with

prodent

regulations

, revenues received by the

government

can be used to provide amenities like roads and power that will help

companies

increase

production

at a lower

cost

. When

production

increases

there

will be a

higher

demand for labour.

Therefore

government

regulations

are potential means of job creation and increase in competition among

companies

that also leads to quality and cheaper

products

for the benefit of consumers.

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Total Errors	37
Grammatical range and accuracy	13
Lexical resource	14
Coherence & cohesion	5
Task response	5