IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the topic but lacks depth in task achievement and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and cohesion.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 41 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 22 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Globalization has made it easier to access diverse cuisines around the world.
How has globalization affected your food choices? Provide personal examples.
#Food
#Direct Question
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:153
Paragraphs:5
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Thesis Statement
make
assimilation and fusion of cuisine
and dishes all around the world
. The diversification of cuisines
are
being brought by all chef who travels the world
to learn world
cuisine
and fusion it to their local food
.In Malaysia,
influx
of foreigner
and expartriats
made the food
and cuisines
easily available in this country. As example, dishes originates from east asian
like japanese
and korean
food
such as sushi, ramen, topokki
and jjangmyeong
are being served in their respective restaurants.Besides that, there are also
cuisines
from western regions like doughnuts, taco
, pastas which originates from US, mexico
, itali
and other countries.One of our renown
malaysian
chef
, Chef Wan
travels around the world
learning international cuisines
and fusion it to local food
such as nasi
arab
, malaysian
pasta, nasi
lemak
.Missing Linking Devices
food
choices by having a variety of
dishes available. I love french
croissant and japanese
sukiyaki