IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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Question
Globalisation has been linked to improved living standards in many regions, yet it also appears to exacerbate economic disparities both within and between countries.
Discuss the effect of globalisation on living standards and economic disparity.
#Globalisation
#Discussion
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positive
effect on living standards in various places, whereas on the other side, it also affect
economically in some nations. Both aspects will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.To begin with, how the internationalization has improved
lifestyle
of the people
? The essential reason can be making individuals
life easier using advanced technology. Businesses, tourist
, job seekers
expanded from domestic to international level. Importing and exporting goods and services widens every passing single day
providing varierty
in products and as well as in services. Skilled people
can earn higher in foreign comparing to their homecountry
. Students can have numerous choices for colleges and education to the world level.However, globalization worsen the economic stability of some
countries
at both internal and international place. Raised percentange
in importing decreased local people
sales rate
which further leads to less income. In addition, it directly or indirectly hikes unemployment issues already prevailing in the country
, more and more families falling under the poverty line. People
are not geeting
jobs in their own regions because other country
influences
market
at cheap
rate. Wars are onother
reason for destroying people
's life because nuclear and other powerful weapons are easy to import and export to the present situations.To wrap it up, globalisation has become very
benificial
for some, while at the saating
me time, it's
is
a curse for another. Devastating monetary value for one, while making stronger for another. The dicussion
can never be ended for links between countries
at world-wide level and their impacts.