IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
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The essay provides a balanced discussion of the advantages and disadvantages of fast food, but lacks a clear thesis statement and examples. Grammar and vocabulary are generally accurate, though there are some awkward phrases and limited variety in sentence structures.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Fast food is known for its convenience and affordability, but it is frequently criticized for its health implications.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of consuming fast food.
#Food
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
Food
is a basic survival necessity for human beings. The body of humans runs of
the energy produced by the kind of nourishment the body consumes. Ever since the dawn of humankind, we have survived on a variety of
diets that includes
both vegetables that we learnt to produce and meat
which we reared from cattle. Humans require a uniform concoction of nutrients that comes from both of the types. As we evolved to the modern man, we dumped all notions of healthy eating and shifted to a more easily available diet of fast
food
. Fast
food
is, in simple terms, a diet that is made from highly processed food
.In the contemporary era where everyone has a tight schedule with no time for cooking, processed or
fast
foods
come as a relief because they are affordable and easily accessible at any cafe. People don't
require a kitchen or cooking skills and
they can easily have tasty meals from the comfort of their homes or restaurants. It can also
be preferred if consumers have a daily commute and don't
have time to cook. Consuming fast
food
also
supports locals and communities that are the backbone of various eateries. The food
also
helps to lighten the mood of people on a stressful day.Fast
food
also
has a negative aspect to it. Majority
of the ingredients used are unhealthy to be eaten. Fast
food
also
contains saturated fats
which is
clinically proven to be harmful to humans. The food
also
lacks nutrients like vitamins and minerals that our body requires. Sometimes, cooking at home can also
be cheaper and healthier. Artificial ingredients added to the food
can also
make it addictive to us. Fast
food
is also
packed in calories that makes
it an unpreferred
choice for weight loss. People can also
suffer from digestive issues if they over-consume fast
food
. The food
can also
contain allergens which can cause harm to the person eating it without any knowledge.Conclusively,
fast
food
is a good choice if eaten on a limit otherwise
it can become addictive.