IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay provides a clear opinion and some examples, but it lacks coherence and has several grammatical errors. Vocabulary is limited and informal, affecting the overall formality and readability of the essay.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 39 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 14 | |
| Lexical resource | 17 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:4
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all
to understand
the question more clear,i
would like to generate new
question for this topic : How can we get
a knowledge
about the cultures
and get
into them? To answer this question, for me, making connections
from the country
which is you want to learn the culture
is the game-changer step for you to do. Moreover
visiting the museums about the countries
history, or get
to see exhibitions furthermore watch
documentaries are significant as the connections
. So geniunely
i
disagree with the perception of 'never understand
the culture
unless speaking the language
'.Initially, making
connections
can seem a bit difficult to experience ,however when you have the self
confidince
to speak with people whether
its
your
language
or the other
languages
you will have some thoughts about the
culture
and if you
even
make vigorous
connections
like having the love of your life, you will live the
culture
without knowing any words.
For instance
you have a boyfriend from various country
, he will demonstrate you the culture
utterly with the food tastes, cultural days,dances and the lifestyle.On the other hand, there is another impactful and eligible way for you to
understand
the culture
is visiting the country
and seeing the culture
in real life. Observing the people to see what's
going on in the country
is maybe the most efficient manner to get
the lifestyle. By examining the documantries
or even
the biographies is even
the significant step for you to have accurate feedbacks about the culture
.In conclusion, from my
point of view
, despite if you don't
know to speak the language
or even
never heard of it, you can learn and understand
the culture
utterly by each person's attitudes and lifestyles. Moreover
get
to know about the past of the country
like mediaevel
times, will be immersive
way to be sophisticated about the country
.