IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5

5.5
Overall Score
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The essay provides a clear opinion and some examples, but it lacks coherence and has several grammatical errors. Vocabulary is limited and informal, affecting the overall formality and readability of the essay.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors39
Grammatical range and accuracy14
Lexical resource17
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4
Question
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:316
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
First of
all
to
understand
the question more clear,
i
would like to generate
new
question for this topic : How can we
get
a knowledge
about the
cultures
and
get
into them? To answer this question, for me, making
connections
from the
country
which is you want to learn the
culture
is the game-changer step for you to do.
Moreover
visiting the museums about the
countries
history, or
get
to see exhibitions furthermore
watch
documentaries are significant as the
connections
. So
geniunely
i
disagree with the perception of 'never
understand
the
culture
unless speaking the
language
'.
Initially, making
connections
can seem a bit difficult to experience ,however when you have the self
confidince
to speak with people whether
its
your
language
or the other
languages
you will have some thoughts about the
culture
and if you
even
make vigorous
connections
like having the love of your life, you will live the
culture
without knowing any words.
For
instance
you have a boyfriend from various
country
, he will demonstrate you the
culture
utterly with the food tastes, cultural days,dances and the lifestyle.
On the other hand, there is another impactful and eligible way for you to
understand
the
culture
is visiting the
country
and seeing the
culture
in real life. Observing the people to see
what's
going on in the
country
is maybe the most efficient manner to
get
the lifestyle. By examining the
documantries
or
even
the biographies is
even
the significant step for you to have accurate feedbacks about the
culture
.
In conclusion, from my
point of view
, despite if you
don't
know to speak the
language
or
even
never heard of it, you can learn and
understand
the
culture
utterly by each person's attitudes and lifestyles.
Moreover
get
to know about the past of the
country
like
mediaevel
times, will be
immersive
way to be sophisticated about the
country
.

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