IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the topic but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Vocabulary usage is limited and repetitive, and the ideas are not fully developed or logically organized.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 32 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Health education is an essential aspect of community health.
Do you agree or disagree?
#Health
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:196
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
people
about health has been becoming the crucial step of development the
community health. I fully support this idea because I believe that the primary aspect of community health can be begun from
giving advices
both formal and informal education.Learning about health will bring
people
to improve their practice
especially regarding with daily diet. They tend to aplicate
their knowledge to mantain
their body stay healthy and
it will contribute in
increasing public awarness
. For instance, a person who has learned about the importance of heathy
life will try to do excersice
and eat safety food. By this action, it will encourage other people
around that person to do the same way and from here, the public health will be built naturally. It happens because people
usually imitate others
behavior
so the rising number of people
who aware with
their health can also support others in their environment.In addition,
eduacate
about healthy life to the citizen will prevent people
from bad behavior
. For example, after giving advice about health, people
will discourage themselves to eat
unhealthy food such as junkfood
and food with high fat or sugar. Day by day, people
will avo