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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in idea development and contains several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and cohesion, along with a more varied lexical resource, would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Infrastructure projects like roads, bridges, and public transit systems are critical for economic growth and improving quality of life, prompting governments to invest heavily in them.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of focusing government spending on infrastructure.
#Government Spending
#Advantage / Disadvantage
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nation
directly. Initially, a country should focus on improving the condition of local roads,bridges and transportation if they want rise
in economic condition. Enough funding and focus should be done by government in such sectors. As spending on these things have positive impact but, it comes along with some negative side effect as well.Investment on valuable
infrastrcutures
should be every nations
first priority because, those are the key elements or factors that will lead a nation
towards the development. Roads and bridges are the most essential for the movement vechile
from one place to another. It helps to boost the tourism as tourist can visit many destination
via it, which will initially foster the economy. And if the local bodies started to focus on improving public transportation then it will results
to less private vechiles
on the highway that will reduce the traffic problem. It is more important to the urban areas where population is enormously high.We can admit that this process has
alot
of benefits but, the disadvantage should not be ignored. Funding on those areas requires alot
of capital along with the manpowers which could be very costly for the nation
. Most probably underdeveloped countries will find it financially impossible. Also, it hampers the environment and wild animal too because, to build the highways many trees are cutted
down and
it will result as increase in deforestation. Problem like airpollution
will come at peak and possibly cause serious health problems in humans.In conclusion, these projects are mandatory for us to survive and has
alot
of benefits but, it causes serious bad impacts on the surroundings and many more other effects which we should consider.