IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and coherence need improvement, and the essay would benefit from more structured development of ideas and examples.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face.
Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?
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Submitted Answer
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Words:159
Paragraphs:2
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Thesis Statement
people
are increasingly opting for online social interactions. From young people
to elderly
, all have cellphone
with them. They use it for many reasons such as getting to know more people
from around the world, searching for updated information, saving pictures and memorable moments, and many more. But right now, there's
a growing preference for virtual over face-to-face socializing. Firstly, people
might do want to online
platforms to allow them to connect at their own convenience, without the constraints of physical location or time zones..
Socializing online inevitably addictive to some degree and
it is difficult to leave once you are on it. Furthermore, people
find it really interesting
due to the fact that online platforms facilitate connections based on shared interests, hobbies, or experiences.Expanding social circles is a positive development
for some reasons
because doing that will enable people
to connect with individuals from diverse backgrounds and cultures, broadening their social horizons.