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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in discussing both benefits and challenges, with limited examples and explanations. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, as there are frequent errors and informal language that affect clarity and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 45 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 19 | |
| Lexical resource | 17 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Integrated public transport systems can offer seamless travel experiences and encourage more people to use public transit. While the benefits include increased convenience and potentially lower costs, the challenges involve logistical, technical, and jurisdictional issues.
Discuss both the benefits and challenges of integrating public transport systems within and across cities.
#Public Transport
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transport
system can provide
ideal exposure and motivate people
to use shared transit. However, there are so many benefits of this system but the limitations are outweigh
. In my opinion
using transit is benefecial
even though there are some barriers to provide
the public
transport
.First of all, using
public
tranport
helps people
alot
as it is cheaper. you
dont
need
to worry about parking your car and paying for ticket
. Secondly, cities are more populated now as everybody has their own vehicle
so at the same time
if you are travelling through
train you dont
need
to wait in congested traffic
which saves your time as well. Thirdly, if you are sleepy due to less sleep of
excessive work
you dont
need
to worry that you could hit somebody as you can trust the public
transport
drivers.On the other hand.
there
are numerous challenges of
this. For instance, it is expensive to provide
integrated transport
to
the public. Government
need
a good budget to provide
more reliable vehles
and need
to hire more people
. Such as, Drivers, Transit security, Lost and Found, etc. There is a shortage of technicians who can built
good buses trains. It could be expensive to hire people
from outside. Last but least, some people
feel that public
transport
doesnt
provide
personal space. people
feel uncomfortable while somebody is standing too close to them.Conclusively,
I belive
public
transport
is best. Everybody can afford that.
However
there are nemerous
challenges behind this idea. Govbernent
need
better strategies and plan to make this happen.