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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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| Overall score | 5.0 | |
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 39 | |
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| Lexical resource | 19 | |
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| Task response | 4 |
Question
Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others believe that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
#Culture
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Thesis Statement
language
is beneficial as one unique language
all around the word
, however others belive
it is not a good point due to some dark sides like culture
loss. In my opinion
having one language
would certainly have positive sides, but there will be seroius
drawbacks.To begin with, it is clear that having one International
language
would cause
easy communication between people
. Having comfortable connection between individuals cause
the ease of trading and daily routines. In other words
, in this case we will have a more unique word
in wich
people
are more relax without any concern about how to communiacte
together. An other
positive aspect of having one language
all around the word
, is
the the
capability of reducing trips. All human think there would be less need for having vacations
rapidly and this condition can improve the efficiency of their efforts. These reasons vividly elaborate that how having one language
could be beneficial.Moreover , there are
seroius
dark sides to have one unique language
. Firstly
it could damage cultures
and result not only to loss of cultures
but also to damage to unity of countries and casuse
catastrophic impacts on individuals
mind. Being damaged by one language
can cause
deep impact on human activities as well. In other words
, all nationalities might lose their characteristic
. Secondly
this may cause
a high reduction in world
population because people
feel less motivated loosing thier
culture
.In conclusion,
i
believe that mono-language
word
would have some merits as uniqueness and also comfortness
for people
but there are seriouse
demerits like loosing cultures
and motivation of people
in different countries
wich
will lead to economic lose.